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Great Films for Learning to Write Dialogue

Writing dialogue that is believable and natural can be a challenge. Each character in your script should sound distinct and different from the other characters. What they say needs to be important to character development or to advance the plot, but it can’t sound contrived. Above all, it has to be entertaining. Take a look (and a listen) to some of the silver screen’s masters of dialogue writing for inspiration. Below, we’ve rounded up some great scenes for you to watch for inspiration along with some great writing exercises. If you’re feeling stuck or simply want to flex your writing muscles, give these scene/exercise combinations a try!

1. Write: Characters Who Want Something From Each Other

Without a doubt, Quentin Tarantino has a flair for writing memorable, quotable dialogue that is simultaneously intense, insightful, and often laugh-out- loud funny. It’s a challenge to find clips that are appropriate for a PG-13 audience, but check out this scene from 1994’s “Pulp Fiction.” The dynamic between Vincent (John Travolta) and Mia (Uma Thurman) is immediately clear when she cuts off his protest with the reminder that he has been directed to do whatever she wants: “Now, I wanna dance; I wanna win. I want that trophy, so dance good.” Her dominance continues as she does the talking for both of them when they take the stage.

Why this works: Mia’s aggressive dialogue is matched by Vincent’s monosyllabic responses. The pauses and body language throughout the scene take on as much meaning as the spoken words.

A challenge for you: Write a scene where one character wants something from another character.

2. Write: Solving a Problem

William Goldman’s screenplay for “Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid” (1969) is full of great back-and- forth between Butch (Paul Newman) and Sundance (Robert Redford). He also includes some great ensemble scenes, such as this one where Butch and Sundance reunite with the Hole in the Wall Gang and find there has been a challenge to Butch’s leadership.

Why this works: There is humor and dramatic tension layered throughout the scene. From News Carver (Timothy Scott) wanting to read his own name in the paper to Harvey Logan’s (Ted Cassidy) insistence on settling the issue with a fight, the scene has crisp dialogue that reveals character and advances the plot, while cementing the bond between Butch and Sundance.

A challenge for you: Write a scene with three or more characters trying to solve a problem — make sure each character is unique.

3. Write: Unwilling Attraction

“It Happened One Night” (1934) is a classic template for romantic comedy that works because of the smart screenplay by Robert Riskin and Samuel Hopkins Adams as much as because of the chemistry of the leads. The Screwball Comedies of this era usually matched a middle class character with a higher class character and “It Happened One Night” pairs a rough newsman with an heiress. In this scene where Peter (Clark Gable) and Ellie (Claudette Colbert) are hitchhiking, her cool wit undermines his gruff confidence.

Why this works: Ellie doesn’t speak many lines, but each one is sharp and cuts right through Peter’s bluster. He may have confidence, but she has brains. Their exchanges help establish the growing attraction between them.

A challenge for you: Write a scene where two characters are attracted to each other, but refuse to acknowledge it.

4. Write: Sustained Dialogue

Guy Ritchie’s films have dialogue that is as fast and twisted as any of the action scenes in them. His 1998 film “Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels” opens with a street hustling scene featuring Bacon (Jason Statham) who delivers his lines in a rapid-fire manner that would leave most actors breathless. Bacon has a crowd gathered around him and he’s trying to sell hot wares with the help of another hustler planted in the audience. Bacon’s eyes move as quickly as his mouth as he tries to find the suckers in the crowd.

Why this works: The scene quickly establishes Bacon as a small-time con who is always looking for an advantage and an escape route.

A challenge for you: Write a scene where a character has a minute and a half of sustained, uninterrupted dialogue.

5. Write: Revealing a Secret 

The screenplay for “Jaws” (1975) was written by Peter Benchley and Carl Gottlieb. The scene where Quint (Robert Shaw) describes surviving the sinking of the USS Indianapolis in the sea between Guam and the Philippines is intense and frightening because of Shaw’s masterful delivery and the sharp details of Quint’s story.

Why this works: The scene is a very primal one, calling to mind the stories told around a fire on a dark, moonless night. The details about shark’s eyes and Quint’s shipmates bobbing lifelessly in the water are told in an unflinching, matter-of-fact way that helps the viewer picture the scene.

A challenge for you: Write a scene where a character reveals a trauma from their past.

6. Write: An Exaggerated Reaction

“Mean Girls” (2004) is full of scenes that are simultaneously funny and revealing. In this scene, Gretchen (Lacey Chabert) tries to explain her friendship with Regina (Rachel McAdams). Gretchen’s anger and insecurity bubble up through the surface as she suffers from yet another humiliation at the hands of Regina.

Why this works: Tina Fey’s script mixes exaggerated teenspeak, manic energy, and characters who are realistic enough to be recognizable even when their situations and reactions are distorted for the sake of comedy.

A challenge for you: Write a comic scene where a character has an exaggerated reaction to a situation.

Don’t stop now!

There are hundreds of other examples of great dialogue in film from every genre and era — when you watch a film, listen to how the dialogue functions and keep an ear out for models you can use for inspiration in your own writing. As you watch your favorite show or film, stop and ask yourself what is happening in the scene — and then try writing that action yourself.

Want to know more about writing dialogue? Check out NYFA’s How to Write Dialogue in Film or How To Write a Phone Conversation in a Screenplay. And apply today to attend NYFA’s Screenwriting School.

 

So You Want To Be Among The Screenwriting Masters?

If your dream is to become a successful screenwriter, you’re going to have to be made of stern stuff. Becoming a working and respected screenwriter certainly doesn’t happen overnight. As with most creative disciplines, it takes years of hard work, of learning your craft, and believing in yourself to follow this dream You’ve got to have staying power, determination and faith in your own abilities.

So you want to be among the screenwriting masters? Good. Put that fire and passion to use — read on to discover what you can do to help your chances, and what resources there are out there to help you on the journey.

In the spirit of standing on the shoulders of giants, learning from the screenwriting masters is heartily encouraged. If it’s screenwriting for film that drives you, there are a few notable books that you really should read. They are:

–       Save The Cat, Blake Snyder

–       Story, Robert McKee

–       How to Write a Screenplay in 21 Days, Viki King

Of course, there are countless others, but these titles are consistently rated highly by screenwriting students. And if you need a structure of working to get your idea out of your head and on to the page, then Viki King’s book is superb. Doubtless you won’t have an amazing script by the end of it, but you’ll have a first draft and that’s a whole lot more to show than a blank piece of paper.

As well as books there are blogs and websites which are stuffed with information and advice. Try these for starters:

Mandy: The very first port of call for most screenwriters in the industry. For jobs, ads and a noticeboard of things going on in the industry, Mandy is the place to go. You can search for people wanting scripts and screenwriters and post casting adverts once you’re in the process of making your film. Easy to use and a good way to see what’s going on.

Go Into The Story: There are hundreds (if not thousands) of screenwriting blogs out there, but Scott Myers’ regular musings on the intricacies of screenwriting and the business itself is among the best. Within the virtual pages of Go Into The Story, you’ll find some insider’s tips and deep insight, all of which can help you take your screenwriting game to the next level.

IMSDb: An acronym for the Internet Movie Script Database, IMSDb purports to be the web’s largest movie script resource and we can find nothing to contradict this. What the site lacks in cosmetic beauty it makes up in functionality, with hundreds of thousands of scripts all categorized by name and genre. Bookmark this.

Simply Scripts: Another great database of free scripts, but its real usefulness lies in its collation of screenwriting contests and fairly comprehensive glossary of industry terms.

Screenwriting Software: If you’re puzzled at the array of software on the market to help you craft your script, here’s our rundown of the best. We separated the wheat from the chaff in both the paid and free categories, so check it out.

At university level, modules in screenwriting are becoming more and more popular, however if you want to truly specialize you’re probably best off opting for an screenwriting masters degree once you’ve finished your bachelor’s. Time spent completing an MFA degree at screenwriting school will pay dividends further down the line, and one of the big plus points to studying screenwriting in a formal setting is the contacts you will make with your peers and with people already working in the industry.

Writing is more often than not a solitary way of working so it’s best to forge partnerships and contacts when you can.

Finally, there’s no better way to get to grips with how scripts work than to watch as many films as possible. However, don’t watch so many that you end up doing nothing but watch movies. It’s important to maintain a balance of watching TV and films and actually writing your own scripts.

If you’ve already read Blake Snyder’s Save The Cat you’ll be aware of his beat sheet, vital points that you need to hit at certain moments in your film. If you don’t think these rules apply to you, sit down with the beat sheet and watch movies in the genre you want to write in. You’ll soon see how Blake’s very nearly always right. And once you’ve gotten to grips with this, your writing should start to flow. In addition, don’t just watch movies. We can’t understate the importance of reading scripts, which is essential for getting the hang of formatting, flow, and structural best practices.

Good luck, and godspeed in your journey to becoming one of this generation’s screenwriting masters!

Read Your Way To Success: The Best Screenwriting Blogs

Blogger Scott W. Smith devours classic screenplays

In an industry based on the ability to write consistently and well, it should come as no surprise that there are countless blogs available online for aspiring screenwriters of all stripes. To help the aspiring screenwriter take advantage of the many articles and essays out there, we have compiled the top screenwriting blogs and sites with the best screenwriting content.

Blogs

Complications Ensue: The Crafty TV and Screenwriting Blog: Authored by Alex Epstein, a professional TV and film script writer who has also written the books Crafty Screenwriting: Writing Movies That Get Made and Crafty TV Writing: Thinking Inside the Box, this blog provides humorous insight into the screenwriting process behind popular films and TV series.

Doug Richardson: The screenwriter behind such action blockbusters as Bad Boys and Die Hard 2, Richardson’s blog is ideal for gaining a glimpse inside the work ethic and experiences of a successful scriptwriter with posts articles full of helpful anecdotes from the films on which he’s worked.

Flying Wrestler: The blog of writer and producer Erik Bork who has written episodes for such famous miniseries Band of Brothers and From the Earth to the Moon, his blog contains informative articles that cover the many different challenges and aspects of scriptwriting.

Go into the Story: Penned by renowned screenwriter Scott Myers, this is the official blog of The Black List and offers both insight into developing the craft of screenwriting alongside highlighting events and professional advice that will help scriptwriters get their screenplay picked up.

John August: A perfect example of the intersection between screenwriting and technology, August—whose writing credits include Go, Charlie’s Angels, Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, and Corpse Bride—now concentrates primarily on creating useful screenwriting applications alongside a popular podcast that explores the craft of writing entitled Scriptnotes.

John Truby: Having served as a script doctor on over 1,800 movies, sitcoms, and TV dramas, John Truby has created a secondary career for himself holding his seminars around the world. His site is chock full of helpful guides and detailed analyses of films of all genres.

Ken Levine: Best known for his extensive TV writing work, which includes M*A*S*H, Cheers, Frasier, and The Simpsons, Ken Levine’s blog provides a Hollywood veteran’s insight into the current state of TV writing along with helpful articles that are perfect for the future comedy writer.

Linda Segar’s Official Website: Having pioneered and defined the position of a script consultant back in 1981, Segar is an active and in-demand consultant who has given advice on over 2000 scripts and written nine books on the craft of penning a screenplay. Her site is a good source to work with a venerable screenwriter and producer.

Screenwriting from Iowa: Written by Scott W. Smith, this blog focuses on writers who have chosen to pursue a career in screenwriting outside of Hollywood and how the internet has enabled writers to develop successful careers wherever they might find themselves living.

Script Angel: The blog of script development consultancy Script Angels, the bloggers also write informative articles that will help novice screenwriters to better understand how the industry works.

Script Mag: Started by the screenwriting resource store The Writers Store, Script Mag boasts a hub of blogs that offer numerous articles on the different areas of writing scripts.

ScriptShadow: Based on the idea that one becomes a good screenwriter by studying other scripts, this blog provides daily reviews of film and television scripts in addition to helpful articles that will help one develop his or her screenwriting abilities.

Scriptwriting Secrets: Although nearly 16 years old at this point, Steven Sashen’s eBook remains online for a reason as it covers the fundamentals of the screenwriting craft , making his site an ideal starting point for the aspiring screenwriter. While some of the information is out of date, Sashen’s eBook still contains plenty of invaluable advice for both the seasoned and novice scriptwriter.

Steven Pressfield: A wholly unique insight into the process of writing in a particular genre, Steven Pressfield is a writer who has focused primarily on military stories—though his book The Legend of Bagger Vance was a departure from his usual subject matter—his site is full of useful advice for screenwriters interested in penning stories about the military and war.

The Aspiring TV Writer & Screenwriter Blog: Featuring a number of professional contributors who are currently working in the industry, The Aspiring TV Writer & Screenwriter Blog focuses on the practical skills aspiring screenwriters need to cultivate to land an internship, make the right connections, and much more.

The Bitter Script Reader: Written by an anonymous script reader for one of the top agencies in Hollywood, this blog offers invaluable advice as to how to write a script that will actually grab the attention of a script reader.

The Screenwriting Spark: An excellent source for articles, interviews, videos, and many more resources that demystify the craft of screenwriting, The Screenwriting Spark was created with the simple and effective philosophy that screenwriters inspire screenwriters.

Wordplay: Featuring forums and essays, this screenwriting hub is best known for its insightful library of columns that includes over 100 essays written by professional screenwriters covering virtually every facet of the screenwriting process.